Your use of fading and various degrees of opacity definitely gives the sense that you're exisiting in the single image at different times. You could have used different pictures, though, so that you weren't in the same pose in all three instances, which would have maximized the effect of this being layered snapshots of three separate times.
This is really cool. The fading gradient makes it easy to tell you're not just half invisible, but teleporting. The use of a city scape also helps to tell that maybe you're teleporting off into the distant area. And the clean work is also worth complementing !
really nice editing, but it looks more like you're the invisible women, maybe if you had some sort of zoom motion blur it would give it that teleportation effect.
I love the background but I don't like that very small and far-away shadow, because the readers cant really tell by the picture that it is the power of teleportation. That shadow is just too small to be notice.
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Very polished and clean. It is clear to me what your superpower is, and I really liked how you make youself look like you were teleporting to different places. The particle effect you used looks really good. It's a bit tough to see exactly what is going on in the background (meaning the third and smallest form of yourself), and I think that making the particle effects that connect your three forms would make it easier for the viewer to tell what is going on. The first thing that stands out to me is your biggest form on the right. Overall, really well done!
Your use of fading and various degrees of opacity definitely gives the sense that you're exisiting in the single image at different times. You could have used different pictures, though, so that you weren't in the same pose in all three instances, which would have maximized the effect of this being layered snapshots of three separate times.
ReplyDeletethis was very interesting. more to the pint that you took the idea of fading as teleportation was smart.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool. The fading gradient makes it easy to tell you're not just half invisible, but teleporting. The use of a city scape also helps to tell that maybe you're teleporting off into the distant area. And the clean work is also worth complementing !
ReplyDeletereally nice editing, but it looks more like you're the invisible women, maybe if you had some sort of zoom motion blur it would give it that teleportation effect.
ReplyDeleteI love the background but I don't like that very small and far-away shadow, because the readers cant really tell by the picture that it is the power of teleportation. That shadow is just too small to be notice.
ReplyDelete[I think the comment I wrote a moment ago got erased, so here I go again.]
ReplyDeleteVery polished and clean. It is clear to me what your superpower is, and I really liked how you make youself look like you were teleporting to different places. The particle effect you used looks really good. It's a bit tough to see exactly what is going on in the background (meaning the third and smallest form of yourself), and I think that making the particle effects that connect your three forms would make it easier for the viewer to tell what is going on. The first thing that stands out to me is your biggest form on the right. Overall, really well done!