Although the warping effect id done really well, the picture itself is pretty confusing to me. I don't see what's supposed to be happening and the picture of you (?) at the golf range is confusing as well.
I was actually thinking about doing something like this i thought it was pretty cool, however mine probably would have been bending time which is basically the same thing, i think it would look cooler if you were able to control the powers instead of using a gun.
The warping effect does work well on your picture, however it is very obvious that your lower body doesn't really match with your upper body. Maybe you could try to adjust the location and the size of your body to make this photo more real.
At first glance, it's a bit confusing as to what is going on, but at second glance, I totally got it. I love this! It's a very cool action scene because there's a lot going on in the frame, and the viewer can anticipate what's about to happen. It is noticable after a few looks over that the guy with the gun's pants are really high up, so that looks a little odd. Other than that, the thing you may want to consider is lessening the size of the warp effect so that the picture and the surroundings are a bit more clear to the viewer, but even if you were to keep the large effect, I as a viewer can understand what is happening. Overall, I really like this piece - it's a really creative concept that you made visible really well!
Although the warping effect id done really well, the picture itself is pretty confusing to me. I don't see what's supposed to be happening and the picture of you (?) at the golf range is confusing as well.
ReplyDeleteI was actually thinking about doing something like this i thought it was pretty cool, however mine probably would have been bending time which is basically the same thing, i think it would look cooler if you were able to control the powers instead of using a gun.
ReplyDeleteThe warping effect does work well on your picture, however it is very obvious that your lower body doesn't really match with your upper body. Maybe you could try to adjust the location and the size of your body to make this photo more real.
ReplyDeleteAt first glance, it's a bit confusing as to what is going on, but at second glance, I totally got it. I love this! It's a very cool action scene because there's a lot going on in the frame, and the viewer can anticipate what's about to happen. It is noticable after a few looks over that the guy with the gun's pants are really high up, so that looks a little odd. Other than that, the thing you may want to consider is lessening the size of the warp effect so that the picture and the surroundings are a bit more clear to the viewer, but even if you were to keep the large effect, I as a viewer can understand what is happening. Overall, I really like this piece - it's a really creative concept that you made visible really well!
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